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Falling
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im losing her
she's falling too quickly
....too quickly
i try to pull her to me
but it hurts too much,
and i dont like when it hurts
ouch.
i feel her slipping
...again
i dont think i can go on
no, i KNOW i cant go on
sorry
but i guess im not strong enough
and sorry but i have to...
let go
no wait!
i think i feel regret
yepp for sure its regret
i wish i could go back to before but i know and you know
that its too late
we cant go back but maybe....
could we move forward?
she's falling too quickly
....too quickly
i try to pull her to me
but it hurts too much,
and i dont like when it hurts
ouch.
i feel her slipping
...again
i dont think i can go on
no, i KNOW i cant go on
sorry
but i guess im not strong enough
and sorry but i have to...
let go
no wait!
i think i feel regret
yepp for sure its regret
i wish i could go back to before but i know and you know
that its too late
we cant go back but maybe....
could we move forward?
hmm wow kind of dramatic...
im really horrible at poems so i just free-line-d i guess?
urgh definitely based on real life...
um it came out of randomness so i stared putting all my feelings into some sort of metaphor of falling
pathetic attempt but it IS something so yah now i have 1 item in my gallery
...yay?
im really horrible at poems so i just free-line-d i guess?
urgh definitely based on real life...
um it came out of randomness so i stared putting all my feelings into some sort of metaphor of falling
pathetic attempt but it IS something so yah now i have 1 item in my gallery
...yay?
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ya! first deviation!