literature

Falling

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im losing her
she's falling too quickly

....too quickly

i try to pull her to me
but it hurts too much,

and i dont like when it hurts

ouch.
i feel her slipping

...again

i dont think i can go on
no, i KNOW i cant go on

sorry
but i guess im not strong enough
and sorry but i have to...
let go



no wait!
i think i feel regret
yepp for sure its regret

i wish i could go back to before but i know and you know
that its too late

we cant go back but maybe....
could we move forward?
hmm wow kind of dramatic...

im really horrible at poems so i just free-line-d i guess?
urgh definitely based on real life...

um it came out of randomness so i stared putting all my feelings into some sort of metaphor of falling

pathetic attempt but it IS something so yah now i have 1 item in my gallery

...yay?
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KazeShiro's avatar
ya! first deviation!